2 thoughts on “The War: Twine Story Beta

  1. I really like this concept. I just wanted to point out that there seems to be a typo on the page after you click “Sign up for the Army.” One of the options isn’t clickable. Also, I find it really interesting that your group is using “I” instead of the second-person “you.” I haven’t played through all of your options yet, but it seems like this would make for very interesting protagonist-death scenes.

    1. Thanks very much for your thoughtful comments. It appears that the non-clickable option didn’t lead to any branches, so I’ve removed it. Also, if you happen to play on, we’d be curious to hear how you find the contrast between some branches using second-person and others using first-person (our story features both).

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